It looks strange to merge Cobb and Condon as family names and then refer to Tired Business Men first, where Joe and Jackie obviously are not brothers as only child Joe is the new kid in town. A different order of paragraphs might make more sense.Rjh (talk) 19:46, May 29, 2017 (UTC)
What do you suggest? Personally, it sounds like Joe could be playing a new character, while Joe the brother is somewhere behind the scenes. How should something like that be phrased? Thor2000 (talk) 19:53, May 29, 2017 (UTC)